Wednesday, 30 January 2013
Script Ideas
This is the draft script i have thought of for our film. it includes all the dialogue i think should be included and all actions that would be performed throughout.
Similar films to our genre.
A similar film to ours is Thir13en ghosts. It is about a haunted house that has strange 'happennings' that cannot be pinned onto one person. It was released in 2001, being a remake of a 1960 film. It only has a 13% enjoyment rate on Rotten Tomatoes as it is found to be lacking in scares. This is obviously a personal opinion as my experience of watching this was the total opposite.
The trailer is a fastly edited video which is full of suspense just like the actual film. The only thing worse than being trapped in a house with a ghost, is being trapped in a house with thirteen ghosts.
Check out the trailer,
Production Logo- My Idea
I have created an idea for our production logo for ours being set in a woods mainly.. Here it is! This was made with photoshop!
Tuesday, 29 January 2013
Analysis Of The First 15 Miinutes Of...
My Bloody Valentine (9181)

The sound used, is mainly heavy breathing,
which can create an eerie atmosphere, and slow quite music. This can also
create tension, but as the scene progresses, the breathing and music have a
sexual connotation. The unknown person’s breathing becomes quicker suggests
anger and frustration.

Another way in which our film is similar to
My Bloody Valentine is that it has a scene prior to the main title being shown. However we plan to have the main actors, producers and other names shown
after the main title being shown which is opposite to My Bloody Valentine.
Also the first scene has quite slow editing
because it is creating suspense and is misleading the audience, making them
think that it is a romantic scene. On the other hand, the first scene in our
film will have quick, jumpy editing because it is trying to emphasize the
character’s fear and panic. Another way in which the two films are similar is
that a female dies first and early on in the film.
Once the main title has been shown, it tells
you the date “Thursday, February 12th”. It is also set in a
mine, which shows the audience a link between the first scene and the current
scene. The difference between our film and MBV is that our first scene is a
dream sequence and then becomes reality, but MBV shows a passage of time with a
linear structure.



character because he has more screen time.
Later on, two establishing shots are used (below left). One is of the mine, which tells the audience that is where they work and then a shot of the town is shown which tells the audiencethat there is a change in location and that Valentine’s Day is a big deal. It also links back to the tattoo of the murdered girl and foreshadows terrible events happening later in the film.


The next scene in the film is set in the hall and introduces the main female characters and tells us the relationships between them and the male characters. It them focuses on TJ, Sarah and Axel, showing how Sarah is caught in a love triangle and isn’t happy with the situation. The ladder separating the couple represents that there is something in the way of Axel and Sarah which prevents them from being truly happy together. It also reveals part of a background for the three main characters, which develops throughout the film.
Next, two older characters are brought into the film, one of them being an authority figure. We assume this because he is wearing a smart suit. They are talking about the Valentine’s Day dance, but the Mayor is asking Mabel to play it down a little because of what happened, this intrigues the audience and makes it seem that something is likely to wrong.








Once the commotion dies down, the bartender begins talking again. To draw the audience in and make them focus, a slow zoom is used and the next shot is a flashback to what happened 20 years ago. The audience now find out what happened through visual aids as well as a narrative. It shows an explosion, the two men laughing who should have been at the mine and some disturbing images of the surviving man and how it all started. He then goes onto explain what happened the next year and how the two men died and their hearts found at the Valentine’s Dance and a threat to never hold another one.


The bar is quiet when the flashback ends, then Howard jumps up from behind the bar, mocking the bartender and the tension is lost as everyone starts to laugh. It also makes the audience jump. Because of the way Howard behaves, the audience may assume that something will happen to him as he isn’t taking anything seriously.
Storyline Questionnaire
This is the questionnaire we have created for our film to see what the public think of our story line and to create feedback for us to check out and find improvements.
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